The paper accurately followed IMRaD format, the language used was formal but easy to understand without the use of first and second person pronouns. I found no pattern errors in this report, although on an honest note I am not entirely sure what I am looking for. The paper does not currently fulfill the minimum length required, however on it's completion I believe it will. Skimming the paper as a whole it does seem to flow well, there are not any random off topic things in it. The abstract is incomplete due to the paper as a whole not being finished, the same is true about the results and discussion sections, however all the need-to-know points have been made in the participants and methods sections.
This report just needs to be increased in length and expanded upon for ideas. It is well organized and written well it just needs to be completed. Take out the I's as well as the Me's. You got this.
The paper accurately followed IMRaD format, the language used was formal but easy to understand without the use of first and second person pronouns. I found no pattern errors in this report, although on an honest note I am not entirely sure what I am looking for. The paper does not currently fulfill the minimum length required, however on it's completion I believe it will. Skimming the paper as a whole it does seem to flow well, there are not any random off topic things in it. The abstract is incomplete due to the paper as a whole not being finished, the same is true about the results and discussion sections, however all the need-to-know points have been made in the participants and methods sections.
ReplyDeleteThis report just needs to be increased in length and expanded upon for ideas. It is well organized and written well it just needs to be completed. Take out the I's as well as the Me's. You got this.
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